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Post by RealPitBull on Feb 28, 2014 11:17:33 GMT -5
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Post by emilys on Feb 28, 2014 23:38:31 GMT -5
vomitous from beginning to end.
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Post by RealPitBull on Mar 3, 2014 8:20:30 GMT -5
I didn't think it was so bad, just the first few fictional paragraphs. That was with a quick read-through. What specifically, Em? Besides the obvious fake history. I was surprised to see some people posting this highly praising it on FB. Just because I thought the crappy aspects didn't outweigh the good stuff.
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Post by emilys on Mar 3, 2014 11:38:46 GMT -5
you can't write accurately if you start from a position of bullsh**. If you get the history wrong, everything that follows will be wrong. There's no "there" there... research from the internet....
It's just plain sloppy. (like the reference to "the Obamas" in the mention of the White House statement.
Just because it's "positive" message doesn't mean we should support it.
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Post by RealPitBull on Mar 3, 2014 12:20:39 GMT -5
That's a good point, re: the starting from a place of bullshit.
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